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Aug 13Liked by Don Paul

Hamid Drake Alex de Grassi and your poem "Toward End of Candomble" (had to look up that word)

at 5 a.m. led to much more Hamid Drake. Amazing all of it thank you. Here's my cut -up (?)of Matt Gonzalez' titles (such a terrific forward to your book!)which I quickly did while listening again to it all. I want to change it maybe - but that's how it came so...

Just wonderful! Your poet voice yes, over the years, yes so moving. Many thanks.

Enshrined Blue

Thistle-loaded language blooms

as how else

Quince yellow outside

skyward, slow-motion choirs sing

Beauty will be lifted

Pushed through the lifted arms.

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Always great to HEAR from you, NANCY YVONNE, and looking forward to more of your poem-form expressions!

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